maisey ferret
UG's Ball of hair
Join date: Oct 2004
773 IQ
#1
Ive already done a electronic synth based composition. and this is my 2nd comp. written to fit into the "popular song" catagory.

struggling with vox line the most. all feedback welcome. enjoy.
Attachments:
A2 Comp.zip
Gibson, Martin, Orange, Apple.
BKGMorley
Registered User
Join date: Nov 2007
595 IQ
#3
Quote by szekelymihai
well sincerely i dont really understand the "fills" in hardcore songs. cause they sound so out of tune(for me)then, the song is quite good


Thats the whole point
psychotim
Registered User
Join date: Sep 2006
975 IQ
#4
Pretty sweet song. I like the chorus very good, but i felt like there was something that could be improved there, dont know what though.
Also like the vox lines, theyre a little different i think, except in the chorus, they're good, but not that unique.
Your breakdown is sweet, but i think you drag it out a little too long.