Ive already done a electronic synth based composition. and this is my 2nd comp. written to fit into the "popular song" catagory.

struggling with vox line the most. all feedback welcome. enjoy.
A2 Comp.zip
Gibson, Martin, Orange, Apple.
Quote by szekelymihai
well sincerely i dont really understand the "fills" in hardcore songs. cause they sound so out of tune(for me)then, the song is quite good

Thats the whole point
Pretty sweet song. I like the chorus very good, but i felt like there was something that could be improved there, dont know what though.
Also like the vox lines, theyre a little different i think, except in the chorus, they're good, but not that unique.
Your breakdown is sweet, but i think you drag it out a little too long.