on my profile now, called breadwar. has string synth and piano in addition to typical rock instrumentation. also i did the bass with a keyboard because i don't have a bass so the bass kinda sucks.
The lead is very tinny; it would sound a lot better with a bit of thickness to it. other than that I thought it was pretty good, kept the melody flowing well but I kept on waiting for it to cut loose a bit. Good work though