#1
C4C

Tell Me

Tell me,
What happened to us,
Things aren't the same,
Everything's changing.
And Tell me,
Why my best,
Is never enough,
Don't keep me waiting.

Cause I can't take this any more.
Just won't take this any more.
Cannot take this any more,
You're such a f ucking w hore.

Now tell me,
Why are you crying?
Wasn't it you,
Who broke up with me?
And tell me,
That everything,
Will work out in the end,
Even though I disagree.

Cause I can't take this any more.
Just won't take this any more.
Cannot take this any more,
You're such a f ucking w hore.

Tell me,
Exactly, what is on your mind,
I promise I'll pretend to care.
Then tell me,
Everything you wanted,
Everthing you need from me,
I gave no gaurentees.

Cause I can't take this any more.
Just won't take this any more.
Cannot take this any more,
You're such a f ucking w hore.
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Avatar 2x12
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#3
Song, rock/metal.
My Gear:
Peavey 6505+
Marshall 1960B
Schecter Hellraiser Avenger
Ibanez VBT700
Marshall Guv'nor
Marshall Echohead
Morley Tremonti Wah
Boss TU-2
Boss NS-2
Avatar 2x12
EHX Holy Grail Reverb
Furman SPB 8C
Boss Flange
#4
Quote by alienboy18241
Song, rock/metal.

ok. I ask because while reading this, I sang it like it would be a melodic hardcore song (ex: set your goals, comeback kid, daggermouth...). IMO it would work with screaming vocals and heavy guitars atthe chorus. And lighter, softer, almost just talking with a nice little lead guitar part in the background for the verses.

EDIT: I have to go, but sometime later tonight I will do a full crit.
#5
^^Yeah for the first verse I really had a real soft sound in my mind with a heavier chorus and then the other two verses being heavier than the first verse but softer than the chorus.
My Gear:
Peavey 6505+
Marshall 1960B
Schecter Hellraiser Avenger
Ibanez VBT700
Marshall Guv'nor
Marshall Echohead
Morley Tremonti Wah
Boss TU-2
Boss NS-2
Avatar 2x12
EHX Holy Grail Reverb
Furman SPB 8C
Boss Flange