#1
My new song, this one I'm actually going to record a home demo with my friend.


Drain Me


You do,
You know,
You always leech my mind,
You drain me!

Drain !

Drain !

Release me !

Drain !

Drain !

Reject me !


x 2


So thats it

Constructive Crit please

Cam
#2
Not much to say, really. This could go many directions musically. The lyrics are cool but not very full as in, they don't go anywhere really which you could work on in the future. Good luck recording
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Park that car
Drop that phone
Sleep on the floor
Dream about me
#3
ha.. ha.. uhh.. iono man.. your not givin to omuch material to work with O.o, keep on truckin i guess O.o
It's not stalking to watch her sleep if she fell asleep watching a movie.
a silly wind
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