#1
Something I wrote today.


The Man Who Found His Way

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"Maybe you could take me back to the place where I suddenly found my fountain of grace.
But if we don't open our eyes, we'll never know just what we will find.
Now here I am, down on my knees and I can feel your love the pleasant breeze.
But I don't know if I'll stay too long, cause I've been torn all through my songs.


Maybe one day, I'll find the strength in myself to live in this way.
I don't live my life for today.
Do what you will, but as for me I'll live my life for more than next to nil.
Oh I can't stand where I've been.


I've been worried about been lost. My selfish were to come at a cost.
I hope that I will make it through, cause I don't wanna be forgotten by you.
I put you last, and myself first. Lost without you was the worst.
But maybe I'm not so long gone, maybe I finally right the wrong.


Maybe one day, I'll find the strength in myself to live in this way.
I don't live my life for today.
Do what you will, but as for me I'll live my life for more than next to nil.
Oh I can't stand where I've been.

Maybe one day, I'll find the strength in myself to live in this way.
I don't live my life for today.
Do what you will, but as for me I'll live my life for more than next to nil.
Oh I can't stand where I've been."

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Still this, and I'll kill you.
#2
this seems well put together and it flows fairly well and yet there's nothing truly striking about it. i like the way it's worded though and would like to read more from you.
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#3
Yeah. Hopefully, when I'm older, my lyrical prowess will have expanded.