#1
What if I walked away
Is there anything you would say
To make me turn around
Turn back to you

what if i wanted out
would you just sit and pout
or would you try to win me back
cause you wanted to be with me

Everythings changing nothings the same
Am I the one to blame
All I want to do When I go out with you
Is Give you a realizing tune
You might call it trying to get in your pants
But I want you to understand
That I just want to hold your hand

What If i said I hated you
And convinced its the truth
would you believe me
Or just know I'm sad

What if I gave you a gift
Even if we were adrift
Would it make you realize
or would you blow it off

Everythings changing nothings the same
Am I the one to blame
All I want to do When I go out with you
Is Give you a realizing tune
You might call it trying to get in your pants
But I want you to understand
That I just want to hold your hand

What If I said we couldn't be friends
I would be afraid that would be the end
what would you say?
What would you do?


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#2
Wow. I don't think theres anything I can really criticize you on haha. It has a good flow and a sense of direction. Love the verses, especially the "What if I said I hated you" one.
The only thing that bothered me at all was the 'realizing tune'. Realizing didn't fit the place, I think theres another word better suited.

Btw is this a song or poem or...?

Great job man. 5 stars if I could rate it. Keep up the writing.
#3
Reminds me of a Staind song....Everything Changes...

If you just walked away
What could I really say?
Would it matter anyways?
Would it change how you feel?

But everything changes if I could
turn back the years, if you could
learn to forgive me then I could
learn to feel
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