SsPunk
UG Senior Member
Join date: Jan 2004
310 IQ
#1
wrote this for a girl..

it's about her eyes

Track 1
      S S  S S S S  S S S S  S S S S S  S  
E||---------------------------------------|
B||------------0-----------------0--------|
G||*---------8---8-------------8---8------|
D||*------10-------10-------10---------10-|
A||-----9-------------9---9----------9----|
E||---7-----------------7-----------------|


  S S  S S S S  S S S S  S T  T  S S S S    S S S S S S S S S S S S S S S S  
-----------------------------------------|----------------------------------|
-----------0-----------------------------|----------0---------------0-------|
---------8---8---------------------------|--------3---3-----------3---3-----|
------10-------10-------10---------------|------5-------5-------5---------5-|
----9-------------9---9------------------|----4-----------4---4---------4---|
--7-----------------7------7h-8p-7-6-3-6-|--2---------------2---------------|


  S S S S S S S S S S S S S S S S      S S  S S S S  S S S S  S S S S S  S  
-----------------------------------||--------------------------------------|
----------0---------------0--------||-----------0-----------------0--------|
--------3---3-----------3---------*||---------8---8-------------8---8------|
------5-------5-------5-----------*||------10-------10-------10---------10-|
----4-----------4---4--------------||----9-------------9---9----------9----|
--2---------------2---------2-3-6--||--7-----------------7------------L--8-|


  S S  S S S S  S S S S  S T  T  S S S S    S S S S S S S S S S S S S S S S  
-----------------------------------------|--0---------------L---------------|
-----------0-----------------------------|----------0---------------0-------|
---------8---8---------------------------|--------1---1-----------1---1-----|
------10-------10-------10---------------|------3-------3-------3---------3-|
----9-------------9---9------------------|----2-----------2---2---------2---|
--7-----------------7------7h-8p-7-5-4-1-|--0-----------L-1-0---------------|


                          |---5---| |---5---| |---5---| |---5---|  
  S S S S S S S S S S S S X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X  
--0---------------L---------------4---------4---------1---------1-|
----------0---------------------6---------6---------3---------3---|
--------1---1-----------1-----4---------4---------1---------1-----|
------3-------3-------3-----6---------6---------3---------3-------|
----2-----------2---2---------------5-------------------2---------|
--0---------------0-------4-------------------1-------------------|


                                 5    --  
  Q    S  S  S   S  S  S S S E   X        
--L--------------------------0~--L-|----||
--L------------------------0-------|----||
--L----------------------1---------|----||
--L-----------------2h-3-----------|----||
--L--------------2-----------------|----||
--L----0h-1h-4p-(0)----------------|----||


Duration Legend
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W - whole
H - half
Q - quarter
E - 8th
S - 16th
T - 32nd
X - 64th
. - note dotted
|-n-|  - n-tuplets 


Hm, I havent posted anything here in years :O

c4c bl8z obvz.
Attachments:
cdsdssd.zip
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HavokStrife
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#3
You got more of a chance gettin' some trim with that than you do other **** I see kids write up here... not bad.
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SsPunk
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Join date: Jan 2004
310 IQ
#4
Quote by Jonathan Trejo
Sounds mysterious lol.. Beginning lacks melody lol, But it was ok ... not my type of music thow. This is a song about a girl? and her eyes? lol howd she like it? anyway c4c


https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=823979


She loved it

Quote by HavokStrife
You got more of a chance gettin' some trim with that than you do other **** I see kids write up here... not bad.


..what?
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rebelmidget
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Join date: Jul 2007
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#5
Quote by HavokStrife
You got more of a chance gettin' some trim with that than you do other **** I see kids write up here... not bad.


not really. any loser who learns 4 or 5 chords and starts strumming a guitar for a girl can do it. It's really easy to make girls think you're good.

I like it. Good job
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JSSynister
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Join date: Oct 2007
111 IQ
#6
must be a scary girl cos' thats spooky man, just spooky. Still, cool little song for a solo acoustic. Was this to any particuliar scale? If so what scale was it.

C4C please?

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=826912
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SsPunk
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Join date: Jan 2004
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#8
Quote by JSSynister
must be a scary girl cos' thats spooky man, just spooky. Still, cool little song for a solo acoustic. Was this to any particuliar scale? If so what scale was it.

C4C please?

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=826912


yeah shes scary but i like her

I mixed between double harmonic minor scales, and major phrygian scales, with a few off-key notes for decoration.

technically the first part should have had a G major key sig.. but since the scales are wierd, and theres accidentals anyway, i didnt bother.

thanks, ill listen to yours now.
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Metal_Theory
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#9
Quote by Jonathan Trejo
well it seems he's in beginner town posting something like that lol.
Uhhh... what?

I liked it, it's different. It could use an accompaniment though and the GP5 levels need mixing. The GP4 cuts out some notes entirely. Very nice though, now I'm really curious about this girls dissonant eyes.
SsPunk
UG Senior Member
Join date: Jan 2004
310 IQ
#10
Quote by Metal_Theory
Uhhh... what?

I liked it, it's different. It could use an accompaniment though and the GP5 levels need mixing. The GP4 cuts out some notes entirely. Very nice though, now I'm really curious about this girls dissonant eyes.


Yeah.. didnt quite undersand what he meant there either.

thanks,

they're like.. staring into a beautiful abyss...

anyway, yeah, ill try and fix up the guitar pro file then re-post when its done.

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BKGMorley
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Join date: Nov 2007
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#11
its pretty dark for a song about a girl. its short and that bit right at the very very and is from an Opeth song. 6/10
mcluskylusky
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#12
Quote by BKGMorley
its pretty dark for a song about a girl. its short and that bit right at the very very and is from an Opeth song. 6/10



its probable supposed to be short to leave more time for being with said girl :P

and that bit at the end? it's just an arpeggiated flat 9th chord (i think?), thats like saying to anyone who uses Am as the first chord in their song that they are ripping of stairway to heaven..

anyway, i liked it, what tempo was it supposed to be at? i played it about 60 BPM..

also, please could you tell me more about those scales they sound cool
MyGuitarAndMe
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#13
very minor to be about a girls eyes, although leaving what it was wrote for, its a good little acoustic piece for guitar. As been said before it does sound mysteriously like opeth but i not like its been stole.

Overall a nice piece to play around with but i'd rewrite lyrics before you'd ever make it into a full song. 6.5/10
SsPunk
UG Senior Member
Join date: Jan 2004
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#14
Quote by MyGuitarAndMe
very minor to be about a girls eyes, although leaving what it was wrote for, its a good little acoustic piece for guitar. As been said before it does sound mysteriously like opeth but i not like its been stole.

Overall a nice piece to play around with but i'd rewrite lyrics before you'd ever make it into a full song. 6.5/10


Hm, ive never actually listened to opeth, what albums would you reccomend?

about lyrics, it doesnt have any and never will.

and about being minor.. most of the chords in it are major, and there are no minor chords (just a few diminished ones :P ) but i know what you mean, its not supposed to be about being in love, or being happy, or being horny, its about staring into her eyes.. kind of, mysterious.

anyway, i got banned for some post i made in 2004, but im unbanned now, so ill upload the new gp thing later on today.

btw its around 60 bpm or less.
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