#1
I used to tell myself I was fine alone,
But friendships are like art,
No survival value,
But they give value to survival.
Women fuck,
Men take it as it comes.
Women fuck,
Men need more than they can get,
Women fuck,
Men never fight back.
I used to wish I was God,
But that would be too much work.
Now I wish I was a woman,
So I could have power over something.
Last edited by bluesybilly at Oct 13, 2008,
#2
Oh my, joyous piece. I really like it sir.

especially the "Women ****,
Men take it as it comes.
Women ****,
Men need more than they can get,
Women ****,
Men never fight back.
I used to wish I was God,
But that would be too much work.
Now I wish I was a woman,
So I could have power over something
."
Part.

Oh my, such true words.
#8

The repetition in the second stanza really got me. The rest is good, but not great, I like those lines a lot though.




love is a dog from hell.