BKGMorley
Registered User
Join date: Nov 2007
595 IQ
#1
Hi

Ive just written a groove to through on the end of what i allready had, but this song still isnt finished. It the most technical piece on music ive ever done in the respect that theres some weird rythms going on towrds the end. im pretty pround of it. im not a much of a music nerd, so could somone tell me if those are poly rythms at the end. just leave a link of ur track and i'll crit it.

C4C
Attachments:
Lamb 3.zip
Last edited by BKGMorley at Apr 2, 2008,
Garb
Registered User
Join date: Jul 2005
1,776 IQ
#2
Very repetitive, very dissonant, and very mediocre. Although, I'm sure there's gonna be people singing it praises... Not really that good to me, but if you finish it, it might evolve into something good.
mcluskylusky
Registered User
Join date: Apr 2008
10 IQ
#3
well.. it was really just two riffs over and over again

if you wrote some more and repeated stuff a LOT less, it would grow better, IMO

good look in your future musical adventures :P