#1
This is my first attempt at writing lyrics so please don't flame me too badly . I plan to use these lyrics in an accoustic/soft rock song assuming they dont get shot down by you guys

All I have

Chorus:

All I have is time
Time that waits for nothing
Time that’s never stopping
Waiting that has imprisoned me

Verses:

The walls are left scarred
In this prison with no bars
All I know is the time
that I’ve wasted

Always thought but never action
What will it take to get a reaction
Will I ever feel,
the cold air again?

Warm hands pressed against the glass
Struggling to recollect the past
The fear I once felt
I’d never felt so alive

Reckless speculation of our future lives
But looking back they where all lies
Just childish dreams
That could never be
#2
for a first time, it's really nice. i think you could flesh out the verses a bit, but i guess it depends on the melody. i really like how they sound, and the images and wording a very nice. however, i do think you should rhyme the last two lines of every verse as well as the first two. not rhyming the last two breaks the nice flow you have.
#3
Thanks for the feedback, mabye I should write the music and see how the lyrics fit before changing anything?