#1
"I'd give you a rock, but flowers are much more pretty, even though they won't last as long"

"Rocks can wether as well" Emily quickly replied, blushing like a peach.

Whipping water through desert canyons.
Carved away at minerals and sediment.
Balls will chip away at the insides of cannons.

"I suppose" he says.

"I'd give you a gift, but I have nothing to bare. An empty womb resides in the bottom of my body. I'm not sure it is something I could share."
Last edited by freshtunes at May 31, 2014,
#2

This is really really great. I've liked your last couple as well, although I havn't commented. The voice is great, the images are great - especially the line about cannons.




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