ok here's the lyrics to my song "Maybe Someday". Need constructive criticism plz.
It's kinda Coheed and Cambria style if that helps.
Don't steal it!!

You said it again
Perhaps it's the best for you
but not for...me.
Things were better then.
I only wish that I
could make you...see.


Well we lost all faith
in ourselves...today.
Will I ever hold her again
....Maybe Someday.


I've done it again.
Perhaps it's best for us
if we stay...apart.
Counting to ten.
Hands can't count how much
I long for...you.

Then this is sung during the outro.

Maybe Someday...Maybe Someday...Maybe Someday....
"A guitar is the human soul, speaking with just six strings..."- Eddie Lee
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You wish. She probably thinks you're a Stalin/Hitler hybrid... Stitler
In fact, from now on, I'm going to call you Stitler.

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