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ok here's the lyrics to my song "Maybe Someday". Need constructive criticism plz.
It's kinda Coheed and Cambria style if that helps.
Don't steal it!!
VERSE 1

You said it again
Perhaps it's the best for you
but not for...me.
Things were better then.
I only wish that I
could make you...see.

Chorus

Well we lost all faith
in ourselves...today.
Will I ever hold her again
....Maybe Someday.

VERSE 2

I've done it again.
Perhaps it's best for us
if we stay...apart.
Counting to ten.
Hands can't count how much
I long for...you.

Then this is sung during the outro.

Maybe Someday...Maybe Someday...Maybe Someday....
"A guitar is the human soul, speaking with just six strings..."- Eddie Lee
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You wish. She probably thinks you're a Stalin/Hitler hybrid... Stitler
In fact, from now on, I'm going to call you Stitler.

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