#1
I accidently deleted my other thread.

Please check it out in my profile.

I had alot of fun recording this song and I hope that shines through my music.

Please crit.
My obligatory gear list

Guitars
Schecter C-1 Classic
Gibson SG Special
1987 Fender Strat
Epiphone PR-150

Amp and Effects
Peavey Valveking 112
Boss DD-6
Crybaby Wah-wah
Ibanez TS-9DX
Banshee 2 Talkbox


Crit plz! Wh ore of Gommorah
#2
Wasn't terrible...but to be honest it really wasn't the best. The recording quality could be better with better gear, the song got pretty repetitive with the main riff dragging on too long in my opinion., and there were some timing issues. Also the lead work could be more smooth and thought out, it sounded like you were just improvising over the same scale in the same position the whole time...It has potential, so keep working at it. Crit mine? http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=827443
Recordings of me and my band in my profile
#3
It's very hard to get the timimg perfect with my software because I have to press play/record then quickly hit the note on time. I'll try to break up the monotonous rythem and tighten up the solo tomorrow. Thanks.
My obligatory gear list

Guitars
Schecter C-1 Classic
Gibson SG Special
1987 Fender Strat
Epiphone PR-150

Amp and Effects
Peavey Valveking 112
Boss DD-6
Crybaby Wah-wah
Ibanez TS-9DX
Banshee 2 Talkbox


Crit plz! Wh ore of Gommorah
#4
*UPDATE*

Okay, after adhearing to Manic Subsiduls' advice I tightened up the rythem, fixed a few timing errors and added a completely new solo.

Please crit, specifically on the solo, I know its a little choppy but most of it is my recording equipment.
My obligatory gear list

Guitars
Schecter C-1 Classic
Gibson SG Special
1987 Fender Strat
Epiphone PR-150

Amp and Effects
Peavey Valveking 112
Boss DD-6
Crybaby Wah-wah
Ibanez TS-9DX
Banshee 2 Talkbox


Crit plz! Wh ore of Gommorah