#1
This song is a little rough, but I have yet to give you a song that isn't. I'll do crit for crit if you like. Here goes:

If you don't hate who you are,
'cept for a couple of scars,
don't wanna die every day or two.

If every day ain't gettin' worse,
you don't contemplate the hurse,
then this song is not for you.
We are the freaks!

We focus our concentration,
on our personal complications,
you look down on us, or look away.

You think you're the better of the two,
but I've got news for you,
'cuz here come's judgement day.
We are the freaks!

We're not normal we know,
and we're ****in' up your flow,
but we gotta stand up for ourselves.

Now we stand up and shriek,
**** yeah, we are the freaks;
you don't like it, go rot in hell.

Now we strike back,
'cuz we're sick of the lack,
of concern if we live or die.

This ain't T.V.,
even if you'd don't see,
these are our ****ed up lives.
We are the freaks!

We're not normal we know,
and we're ****in' up your flow,
but we're standin' up for ourselves.

Now we stand up and shriek,
**** yeah, we are the freaks,
you don't like it, go rot in hell.

We'll take back our respect,
'cuz the worlds a stacked deck,
we gotta fight, before we drown.

You may laugh at the time,
but remember these lines,
when the sky comes crashing down.
We are the freaks!

We're not normal, we know,
and we're ****in' up your flow,
but we're standin' up for ourselves.

Now we stand up and shriek,
**** yeah, we are the freaks,
you don't like it...
GO ROT IN HELL!!

WE ARE THE FREAKS!!
#2
kinda makes me think of london dungeon for some reason pretty good i like it.
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#3
Quote by Gundam pilota09
kinda makes me think of london dungeon for some reason pretty good i like it.

Thanks. Do you know anything I could add or change? I feel like it could still be better.