#2
well, I'm not saying this to be harsh but you're goin to get slated alot.
But i can see good in this, I can see a direct influence with parkway drive - not bad (:
GET YOUR VOCALIST TO PRACTISE!
Im not going to say hes doing it wrong cos everyone has their own technique but he either needs alot of practise or just get a diff vocalist, it sounds like hes takin the piss out of the music...

the music isnt bad at all tho, keep that up
peace xx
PunkAintDead!