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Oooh, piano! It's got a nice tone to it. Just wouldn't be the same on guitar.

At first, the speed up seemed unintentional, but I'm not so sure now. Perhaps make it more deliberate? It just seems like your speeding up on accident at first.

Perhaps look into some more instrument layering. The two, while nice, feel like they need something else to me. But I'm all about production value. I like layers, lots.

In summation: Speeding and layers. That's about all I can say. I think it's pretty solid otherwise.

If you would look at mine: Just a Song to Sing