#1
Today i fought for my life
and today i lost my life
nothing stays the same
no matter how hard you fight
is this wrong, or is it right?

Everyday i dig a little deeper
into this hole of my making
until i cant escape
im cornered in the battlegrounds of my thoughts
with no way out
and all there is left is this war inside

yesturday was my awakening
my day of reconing
i awakened into this fight
unaware of my surroundings
but then it became clear to me

Everyday i dig a little deeper
into this hole of my making
until i cant escape
im cornered in the ****ed up world
with no chance of ever getting out
and all i have left is this war inside

Everday i dig a little deeper
into this hole of my making
i cant escape
my ****ed up life keeps me alive for now
but all i really have to depend on
is this war inside my mind

Tommorrow should be better right?
theres hope for a better life
a life without pain
a life without hurt
you promised it would be better
you promised
you ****in promised
you promised this war will end
but that promise will be broke
because this war inside
never fades away
... does it?

i wrote like 3 songs and this is one of them, dont know how good it is though... what do you think?
#2
Sorry it's taken so long to get to this.

I generally like these straightforward pieces.
I think some of the words trip up the message a little. Like some things are cluttered and some things I feel are a little overstated.
Maybe you could vary it somehow metaphorically to add a little more depth to the length.
Anyways, good job, I like it.


Love the Low end