#1
Mountain

Life is a mountain
it goes up and down
just one mistake makes you feel
like you were smashed to the ground

Your heart drops low
almost to your feet
you listen to your pulse
to hear a steady beat

check your breathing
your vital signs
notice you're still alive
but still in a bind

fix your mistake
with some strength and time
climb back up the mountain
in the end you'll be fine

work your way up
at your own steady pace
realize the game of life
is much more than a race


c4c
#2
Life is a mountain
it goes up and down
just one mistake makes you feel
like you were smashed to the ground
I dont like this as the start of the song. it sounds more like a chorus

Your heart drops low
almost to your feet
you listen to your pulse
to hear a steady beat

check your breathing
your vital signs
notice you're still alive
but still in a bind
The last line in the stanza just doesn't fo anything for me

fix your mistake
with some strength and time
climb back up the mountain
in the end you'll be fine
again not liking the last line, maybe it could just be and you'll be fine

work your way up
at your own steady pace
realize the game of life
is much more than a race


pretty good, I'm not much of a critic though... if u can please tell me what you think of my song https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=828250