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This is basically a first draft.. I'm curious as to whether or not I should even pursue revising this any further or just scrap the idea altogether. It's been a while since I've written a poem that's as loose and gooey and free as this seems to me.. So with that said, any comments or criticism are welcome


I have a built a moat around my fear.
Covered all the angles,
Scoured every crevice,
Made certainties where uncertainties once loomed

I have strangled terror,
Suffocated creaks,
Banished villains,
Beheading their young at the base of the root

I bellow, to higher ground!
To tranquil nights!
To sleep and solace
Without electric lights

To what lies below,
For if I shall fall,
From my fortress in the top bunk
With my back against the wall
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