#1
Together

The returning angel
From a far away place
Looking down from the sky
Now it’s just you and me

For far to long
I’ve waited for this time
To see you again
To hear you again
For us to be together

An angel with wings
Of sparkling silver feathers
Calls down to me as I sleep
That you have returned

For far to long
I’ve waited for this time
To see you again
To hear you again
For us to be together

Your angelic face smiles at me
From the other end of the table
Finally we can be together
Once and forever

For far to long
I’ve waited for this time
To see you again
To hear you again
For us to be together
#2
I have to say that this is a very sweet song. I liked the theme you used I thought you handled it pretty. (Yes, comparing your lover to an angel has been used countless times in songs, but I think the analogy is always great nonetheless). Hwoever, there were a few changes I would suggest. First of all, in the first I would be more specific than "a faraway place". Also at the end I would change "you and me" to "her and me". Simply because, you address the angel in third person at the beginning of the verse. (I'm assuming the "you" is the "returning angel"). In the second verse I would use different adjective than "sparkling siver" to describe the feathers. In think instead of describing what they look like, describe how they make you feel, like "comforting" or "reassuring". Then in the third verse I would change "From the other end of the table." to "From the table of Heaven's banquet", simply because it's more specific and keeps with the angel theme you used.
Anyways, would you mind checking mine out?

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