#1
This is my second installment of the week, its not finished yet.

I seem to having writers block with this one, so if you give any suggestions and helping hands, i'll happily give you a full crit on one of your songs, but it must meet one criteria:

It must keep that atmosphere i hoped i created.

Feel free to edit as you wish, as any ideas would be appreciated, and the finished song will have credit where due to respected riffs etc.

EDIT: Updated version now uploaded.

Attachments:
Melodic.zip
Quote by dark&broken
I'd like to see any of those meathead homophobes look a Spartan in the eye and call him a fag.

Last edited by eggo_boi_15 at Apr 4, 2008,
#3
Very very nice, The intro was superb lol. Cant belive how nice it flowed. And i perticularly like the strings. There awesome at 17-24. Its a great start i gotta tell ya dude.. Writers block isnt easy but it depends what you do. Do u stare at your screen all day and try to think of a new riff or melody to add?. Or do u use trial and error.
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#4
Quote by DSchmitty
SOUNDS LIKE ****, first of all you better not be a drummer, cuz those symbols went off EVERY ****ING SECOND MY EARS BURSTED, way to noisy/messy, sounds like utter crap and could never be able to have any vocals over it.


Thanks for the constructive criticism there


New updated version uploaded
Quote by dark&broken
I'd like to see any of those meathead homophobes look a Spartan in the eye and call him a fag.