#1
Hey i was really bored today so decided to learn all along the watch tower, only got so far cos it ended up that i had things to do. so Please have a look on my profile and tell me what you think fo the small clip. Btw exuse the recording it was quick and i decided to shove some random effects on in the background and they sound rather ****e=P
#2
Doesn't sound like there's much wrong with it to me.

Nice job.
Gear
Fender Thinline Telecaster Deluxe

1983 Aria Pro II XX Deluxe Flying V

2007 S101 EGU34

1963 Kay Vanguard

1964 Kay Vanguard

AXL Badwater SRO

Hondo Strat

1974 Acoustic(brand) 134 4x10 combo

Epiphone Valve Jr.