#1
Lately i've been feeling like there's something out there
Something that i just can't see
Lately i've been feeling like i don't belong here
Like this world's just not right for me

And i dont know what to believe in
Anymore
And just what are all these visions i'm seeing
What are they for?

Lately i've been lookin with a new perspective
On my life
And Lately i've been so objective
To what everyone sees as right


And i dont know what to believe in
Anymore
And just what are all these visions i'm seeing
What are they for?
How can i escape from this world
How can i get away
And how can i tell myself it's alright
When there's nothing i could say


what do you guys think?

C4C
#2


This...may be...the greatest thing ever written!
Hi, I like pie.




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Last edited by FloydPink92 at Jul 1, 2008,
#3
FloydPink92, I wouldn't quite say that yet. But you did handle an oddly proportioned meter very well (at least on most occasions). There are some spots where the rhythm is thrown, namely the third stanza. Still, it was done quite well.
#4
Decent song. It reminds me a lot of Rob Thomas's "Something to be" song.

I've been looking for something
Something I've never seen
We're all looking for something
Something to be


I can't stand what I'm starting to be
I can't stand the people that I'm starting to need
There's so much now
That can go wrong
And I don't need nobody