#2
Ok.

It starts off pretty well. Nice speed metal riff and the drums and bass sound cool. The rhythm throughout is fine - pretty solid playing throughout. However, i don't care for your tone at all. It's too fuzzy and when the lead comes in again it sounds horrible. Your playing isn't bad but the tone you have destroys your playing a bit. The solo at the end sounds cool though.

You need to bring the drums and bass more into the mix i feel too.

Basically though, if you can tweak your sound this will sound 10x better - although that's just my preference.

You say it isn't finished though so you obviosuly are planning on making chnages and re-recording.

Sorry if that sounded harsh - the ideas are there it's just your sound that lets this down.

C4C?

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