#1
Another song my bass player wrote, just looking for some feedback on this... think of like November Rain, Sweet Child of Mine type stuff for the music.....thanks in advance guys

Rush of a new relationship
Everyone tells me it’s the best
But we’re moving so fast
I can’t compare us to the rest
The scariest thing of all
I don’t feel anything wrong
All of what we do just feels right
Even pouring it into a song

Every time a little bit better
Every day a little bit farther
Every minute a little bit closer
Every second that much happier
And I still have no idea,
What the hell is going on.

Still I’m lost in all of it, movin’ fast
I hope you know what’s going on
‘Cause I’m too excited to focus
You actually like Stevie Ray Vaughn
I’m not used to these feelings I get
In fact it’s the first time I’ve got em
You’re worried about what I’ll do
But I’m scared about losing my gem

Every time a little bit better
Every day a little bit farther
Every minute a little bit closer
Every second that much happier
Do you have any idea,
What the hell is going on.

Even now six months later
We’re still going stronger
My heads high in the clouds
We just keep moving faster
That reality check bounced
So I don’t have to face reality
I’ll sit in our fantasy world
Surrounded by fantastic duality
#2
its not an error... thats the title of the song and ill find one of your songs and crit the best i can