#1
Heres my latest tab song.

Thought I'd upload it to get some comments/ constructive criticism.
Where could i make improvements etc.

Thanks
Attachments:
song #5.zip
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Last edited by iruka2998 at Apr 6, 2008,
#2
It was pretty simple, but still pretty cool. there were a couple things that bothered me. one, which is actually not important at all, is that on the main riff instead of fretting 5-3-2, I thought fretting 5 then 8-7 on the next fret would be better because you would already be in that position. Also, the solo could use some work. It was a nice solo, but I believe that you can do so much more if you get out of that little box. You did once, but otherwise it was just 5's and 7's.

good job, though.
...Nothing you've ever...
...Planned on ever turned out...
...The way you planned...


...You're still disappointing them...
#3
Thanks for the comment !

Yeah I used alot of the Amin pent in this song, and I really do need to break out of the box more often. The solo was short cause I liked what I had and didnt want to screw it up, but I think I'll give it a try and add more to it.

Any 1 else got comments/constructive criticism ?
|-----| Gear |-----|

Ibanez RG(cnt remember)
Marshall MG30DFX
Line 6 Guitar Port


YOUTUBE PR0NZZ