I wrote this song for my sister.. its my first attempt for to write a song and sing.. she asked for it and i warned her lol

She helped me buy my first guitar i really wanted to do sumthing special
soo i donno temme what u guys think
maybe to improve it
or just sum C&C
never mind the greek at the end...

heres the link...
it was nice and thoughtful. happy birthday to your sister. maybe work on the vocals a little, that's all i have to say.
Out of 10 in all honesty im not senstive lol
how would u rate my vocals....
1 being ****
10 being chris cornell