#1
In front of the mirror
I looked at myself
And thought about the time when I needed help
Then I realized that I needed something else
I walked out the door and waved goodbye
Saw her standing there out the corner of my eye
Turned back around and kept on walking
Didn’t hesitate to say
That if im crazy I like it that way
And if im not the same that’s ok
You were so loud my ears were
Ringing
I was on a the edge of a cliff
Clinging
#3
In front of the mirror
I looked at myself
And thought about the time when I needed help
Then I realized that I needed something else

There doesn't seem to be much of a flow here.. try playing with the syllables on lines 2 and 4.

I walked out the door and waved goodbye
Saw her standing there out the corner of my eye
Turned back around and kept on walking

Try referring to yourself a bit more clearly on the third line, because you do so in the rest of the poem, which throws the feel off a bit.

Didn’t hesitate to say
That if im crazy I like it that way
And if im not the same that’s ok
You were so loud my ears were
Ringing
I was on a the edge of a cliff
Clinging

Who are you talking about in line 1? 2 could sound better.. try using more tasteful words that describe how you like it. I like the last three lines... There was really nice flow, and nice rhythm.

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