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half ots, half not, if you catch my drift

[RIGHT]an [size="3"][B]angry[/B][/SIZE] man
a [size="3"][I]poor [/I][/SIZE]man
an [size="3"][B]intelligent[/B][/SIZE] man[/RIGHT]

Oh what a [u]cunning[/u] act he was to perform
[i]"Do you enjoy life? do you wish to keep it?"[/i]
Oh what a man he is, ponders before he acts.
[B]You cannot take a dead man's life[/B]

[RIGHT]A [U]vessel[/U] of [B]hate[/B] and [B]stress[/B]
yet no where from which it originates,
It feeds on it's self, like the weeds you [size="4"]hastily[/SIZE] remove.
[U]You cannot kill what grows of its dead. [/U][/RIGHT]

[i]"Is death your plead?
death your wish?"[/i]
What an [size="1"]intelligent [/SIZE]man he is,
clever, quick, and easy.

This man knows his living.
[RIGHT]but one mistake, leads him to his "debt",
to families, to children, to him, to her,
[I]"Plead your case,
though you shall not be heard
you are a [B]mad [/B]man,

not a [size="1"]clever[/SIZE] one,
one must first see to your death,
[size="3"]for the Dead you have taken,[/SIZE]"

[CENTER]Behind [B][size="3"]bars[/SIZE][/B]!
Placed in [B][size="4"]chains[/SIZE][/B]!
kept like [B]rats [/B]in a[B] box[/B]!
[size="1"]is there much difference, in the Outside?[/SIZE]

[RIGHT]though still the [size="1"]Outside[/SIZE] is [size="3"][B]begged[/B][/SIZE] for,
[I]"what [B]I[/B] beg for [B]I[/B] get![/RIGHT]


[size="1"]he always does get it in the end. [/SIZE]
"They come [U]next[/U] [size="3"]eve[/SIZE],
[B]dead of dawn."
[RIGHT]an [B][size="3"]angry[/SIZE][/B] man
a [I][size="3"]poor[/SIZE][/I] man
an [B][size="3"]intelligent[/SIZE][/B] man[/RIGHT]

[CENTER][size="4"]You cannot kill Dawn[/SIZE]. [/CENTER]

My World is a Dream.[/I][/SIZE][/RIGHT]
Why can’t a heterosexual guy tell a heterosexual guy that he thinks his booty is fly?

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I liked this, and I'll probably have chance to crit it better later (not in the right place at the moment, and this is possibly why I think the layout is a bit pretentious but it may grow on me). I'll be back though to see if I have anything more to say.

Could you crit the song under the 'Yeah?' in my sig?
There's only one thing we can do to thwart the plot of these albino shape-shifting lizard BITCHES!
hmm. it's strange, i don't think i got the full effect. i'll try to comment more later.
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Wow, that took me a while. I definitely liked it, but I'm not sure I completely understand it. I think the way it was displayed brought out the points well. nicely written.
i need to hear some sounds that recognize the pain in me, yeah.
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