#1
So..this is our cover of Welcome to the Jungle..we don't have a singer and we'd only played together twice when we did this, but it's still pretty ****ing sweet.

Check it out..

crit for crit..

thanks
Indigo,
Indigoing,
Indigone.
#4
everything you have there is really good, the guitar was really good, but it could use some vocals though, and yea get your shirt on
#5
I dont want to bash or anything, but the beggiing was awful...not in time, horrible tone, etc...

Then it got a little better...but i think you need to practice more, tone was not good at all...

and the solo was REAL BAD, learn your bends and do it on time...

As i said, im not trying to bash or anything, im just giving my opinion here...but the dudes above are right...why are you NOT using a shirt??..

.if you want to go shirtless youll have to play like Slash first...its a long way in this case...hahaha just kidding
#6
haha..sorry about the shirt, I guess...we'd been playing like two hours and I was hot and sweaty...I guess it's not too appealing but I wasn't really going for sex appeal, haha..

And yeah, the solo's off time and the bends are definitely off at parts, but I only learned the song like, two weeks ago, so give me time to master it, you know?

Thanks for the comments

oh yeah..and I don't have a delay pedal, so the best I can do is the delay built into my amp, which sucks and kills it, so I'm sorry.
Indigo,
Indigoing,
Indigone.
#7
You dont have to be sorry man, everybody has posted some crappy stuff, my first recordings where made with windowns sound recorder over the original track, and i was stupid enough to post it on a forum....

but with time youll learn about tone, and that kinds of stuff, aswell as bending, i still bend out of tune a lot, but compared to the past im better...so keep posting!

i just read my previous reply and it was to harsh and it appeared that i was saying your cover was crap, that was not my intention...

SO KEEP POSTING MAN, SHOW US YOUR PROGRESS
#8
your finger work looks shotty! likes like ur only using 2 fingers! ne1 playing wasnt to bad but trying using atleast 3 fingers if not all 4