#1
Hey guys,

Heres my newest endeavor, I tried to keep the song to its roots but also add my own flair to it. Hopefully you guys enjoy it as much as I do playing it.

I just added it to youtube guys, so if anyone wants to watch it its: http://youtube.com/watch?v=MReJZ3P9Z-Y

Jason
Last edited by |2eM!x at May 16, 2008,
#2
Love it- the vocals especially. I really like it as is. Bongos would sound incredible with it IMO, if you have access to any. Keep up the good work .
#3
Man I love those kinda comments! You made my day. Thanks so much, Im going to work on some bongos, I think thats an awesome idea too. Feel free to pm me anytime, Ill crit your stuff always.
#4
You play the chords pretty well, and your singing's pretty good, but in the beginning of the song, your voice sounds a bit breathless? It could just be me but it sounds sort of like that but after a few seconds pause and you start singing again, it's all good

Crit my Viking Kong cover in my profile please?
#5
Good work, good guitar good vocals. Very good cover.. well I've never heard the song but u get the idea nice cover.
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