#2
Hey man,
Critting as I listen. You do a good job on this song on the verses. The chorus, I am not too fond of. It needs the boost of energy, or else the song seems even more melancholy then it does originally. Guitar is perfect though.

Crit any of my recent stuff?
#3
Quote by |2eM!x
Hey man,
Critting as I listen. You do a good job on this song on the verses. The chorus, I am not too fond of. It needs the boost of energy, or else the song seems even more melancholy then it does originally. Guitar is perfect though.

Crit any of my recent stuff?


thanks and sure I'll take a listen
#4
Sounds pritty good. This is one of my favorate songs.
The strumming sounds fine.
Overall the vocals have a good feel. It goes a bit shakey in the chorus, and a couple of other places, but you seem to have got the feel of the song right.
I feel the vocals near the end (the last verse) could be more intense. But I know from experence that that part is kinda hard to sing.

C4C - https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=818492
My stuff:
Fender Tele 60's Reissue
Schecter Blackhawk
Vintage V300 acoustic
Yamaha RB170 Bass

Peavey Classic 30 amp

Boss SD-1, DOD Grunge, Guyatone PS-010 Compressor, Marshall SV-1, Vox V847, Zoom G2, Line6 Echo Park
#5
Quote by nezv6
Sounds pritty good. This is one of my favorate songs.
The strumming sounds fine.
Overall the vocals have a good feel. It goes a bit shakey in the chorus, and a couple of other places, but you seem to have got the feel of the song right.
I feel the vocals near the end (the last verse) could be more intense. But I know from experence that that part is kinda hard to sing.

C4C - https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=818492


thanks, and I'll try to make the last verse more intense, cause I know he really picks it up then, and I checked yours out, it was pretty good as I said in the forum