#1
Hey this is something that I can up with in class today. I just want to see what you guys think of it so far. I know it still needs some work.

Verse 1

When you wake up in the morning
and you feel like your days alredy done
we all know how you feel
we've all been there before

Chorus

Hey it's time we burn this night away
because tomorrows gonna be a beautiful day
don't you worry everythings gonna be a-ok
tomorrows gonna be a beautiful day

Verse 2

When you sit at home all alone
and you just feel like you need more
we all know how you feel
we've all been there before

Verse 3

When you feel like your complete
becasue you know someone special's waiting for you
you'll see the light of day
and you'll know how beautiful it really is
Guitars:
PRS Custom 24
Gibson Les Paul 60's Tribute
85' MIJ Strat
97' Snakepit Les Paul
LP Traditional 1960 Zebra
MIJ Tele
MIA Strat

Amps:
Silver Jubilee 2525
Peavey Ultra 112
Jet City JCA50H
66' Bassman
Pink Paisley Princeton RV
74' Vibro Champ
Last edited by sheldonpardy at Apr 9, 2008,
#4
Sounds to me like this could deffinantly be about waking up "the morning after" weather it be drinkin, or getting high, or even a random one night stand and thinking "wow, is this my all my life is about?" and then hoping that life will get better. This is honestly great if im getting all that out of 3 stanzas =P great job bro =)
#5
thanks a lot guys
Guitars:
PRS Custom 24
Gibson Les Paul 60's Tribute
85' MIJ Strat
97' Snakepit Les Paul
LP Traditional 1960 Zebra
MIJ Tele
MIA Strat

Amps:
Silver Jubilee 2525
Peavey Ultra 112
Jet City JCA50H
66' Bassman
Pink Paisley Princeton RV
74' Vibro Champ
#7
I had a little time today so I wrote a 3ed verse

when you wake up in the morning
and know someone special's waiting for you
you'll see the light of day
and you'll know how beautiful it really is
Guitars:
PRS Custom 24
Gibson Les Paul 60's Tribute
85' MIJ Strat
97' Snakepit Les Paul
LP Traditional 1960 Zebra
MIJ Tele
MIA Strat

Amps:
Silver Jubilee 2525
Peavey Ultra 112
Jet City JCA50H
66' Bassman
Pink Paisley Princeton RV
74' Vibro Champ