#1
Inspired by Tool.

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This wall rips me,
tears me in two
This boundary
is the most painful I've ever known

These two sides I'm in
divided by a wall of ignorance
These two sides I'm in
See nothing of each other; only what is in between

One hand at the enemy's throat
the other covers their own eyes
Refusing to hear
refusing to see
killing the curiosity

The only good money's blood money
never mind where it comes from
stab, duck
stab, duck
Drink, soak, forgotten

How am I the only one
How am I the only one
the one caught in between

How am I supposed to know
How am I supposed to know
which lie is better?

Rip me, tear me, hold me
blindly
Bask in green and red

Rip me, tear me, hold me
kindly
Expect sympathy

Don't make me choose
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You're just another brick in the wall
#3
Quote by heavyairship
this is great. im not sure about the flow, but you paint a nice picture. very well done.

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=832624


It's to a song with a changing tempo and many different riffs, so thats why the lyrics sound odd by themselves. Thanks for the comment! I will Crit back.
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You're just another brick in the wall
#4
i like it. i guess i can tell it's tool inspired, good or bad? idk.

it's pretty good, not exactly my style but it is really pretty good. nice job.

free crit, but if you wanna crit mine "there, and back"
there are many here among us, who feel that l i f e is

but a [B]joke[/B]. but you and i have been through that, and this is not our [size="1"]fate[/SIZE].