#1
We’ve come to a crossroad that leads to nowhere
Too late to change from your old ways
All your lies have lead to only one thing
The beginning of the end for you and me

You say you love me but you really don’t care
You could pin it on me but I don’t give a damn

Do you love me now?
No more asking what could have been
You pulled me down
Now I’m finally getting back up again
I won’t turn around
I’m stronger without you letting me down
No, I wont turn around
Do you love me now?

Would never expect you to change anything
Didn’t even care about my own hopes and dreams
You never thought of what your lies could bring
Now you’re walkin’ all alone missin’ out on me

You say you love me but you really don’t care
You could pin it on me but I don’t give a damn

Do you love me now?
No more asking what could have been
You pulled me down
Now I’m finally getting back up again
I won’t turn around
I’m stronger without you letting me down
No I wont turn around
Do you love me now?
#2
Quote by kylesegarra
We’ve come to a crossroad that leads to nowhere
Too late to change from your old ways
All your lies have lead to only one thing
The beginning of the end for you and me This verse is kinda cliched, but not too bad

You say you love me but you really don’t care
You could pin it on me but I don’t give a damn Much better, love this stanza. Especially love how it doesn't rhyme, well done

Do you love me now?
No more asking what could have been
You pulled me down
Now I’m finally getting back up again
I won’t turn around
I’m stronger without you letting me down
No, I wont turn around
Do you love me now? Good chorus, get's the point across well

Would never expect you to change anything
Didn’t even care about my own hopes and dreams This line's really pushing it, very cliched
You never thought of what your lies could bring
Now you’re walkin’ all alone missin’ out on me

You say you love me but you really don’t care
You could pin it on me but I don’t give a damn

Do you love me now?
No more asking what could have been
You pulled me down
Now I’m finally getting back up again
I won’t turn around
I’m stronger without you letting me down
No I wont turn around
Do you love me now?


Okay, not too bad, certainly heard worse. I hope my comments help you. c4c?
#3
Cliche, but I like it. For some reason, the aforementioned cliche works in your favour, except in "Didn’t even care about my own hopes and dreams", which is just overused.

I can imagine the chorus would be very catchy if you put it to the right tune.
"You could pin it on me but I don’t give a damn" is a great line.
Nothing spectacular, but if you put it to some good music, it could make a great song.

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