#1
Yea, I don't actually have a title for this one yet guys, so feel free to help me out there as you crit. C4C. oh and if iI owe anyone a crit, please remind me, haven't been on in while so i've probably forgotten.

So anyway here it is. Enjoy!

A craving for love
with no hand to hold
Together with you
is how I wanna grow old

I miss you dear
My sweet winter rose
But for you i can wait
Year after year

I look into your eyes
And love is what I see
To me that's no surprise
But love is never free

To think that would be foolish
I know what i must do
Please don't cry my love
I'm always here for you.
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Close this and repost it with "untitled" as the thread title because otherwise someone will close it for you. I'll crit it when you've done that.
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