Friendly Stoat
Call me Sam.
Join date: Jan 2007
1,094 IQ
#1
Hmm, this is a song that I am halfway through writing for my band. I just wanted to get some opinions and ideas what to do next?
Attachments:
Heavy-ish song.zip
Gear:
Schecter C-1 Hellraiser
Ibanez GRG170DX
Peavey Vypyr 75
Fender Princeton 650 DSP w/ Celestion 80w speaker
bloodshed344
UG Newbie
Join date: Nov 2007
1,673 IQ
#2
It's a pretty standard song, nothing outstanding. Make something somewhat memorable and maybe a solo, but please not a standard metalcore solo. Maybe draw on that current hook you got in there and transform it. Just need to make the song stand out more mainly.

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Friendly Stoat
Call me Sam.
Join date: Jan 2007
1,094 IQ
#3
Hmm ok. I might try and get a dual solo in there somewhere
Gear:
Schecter C-1 Hellraiser
Ibanez GRG170DX
Peavey Vypyr 75
Fender Princeton 650 DSP w/ Celestion 80w speaker