Ug's Metalcore fanboy
Join date: Sep 2006
519 IQ
I wanted to write a song that I didn't need a pick for, seeing as I never have. So a short song with just tapping, finger picking, and strumming .

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UG Newbie
Join date: Nov 2007
1,673 IQ
Pretty good although I think you harmonized everything together too much and a few notes seemed out of place. It was a good song, pretty emotional, we don't get too many of these type of songs on this board, mainly just power metal and metalcore, so this was pretty cool

Crit mine if you want:
Anthony Green Fanboy <3
Join date: Jul 2007
1,501 IQ
I agree. the only problem was a lot of times there was "too much" harmony and it didn't sound right.

other than that, I really liked this.
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