bakshandloomis
Ug's Metalcore fanboy
Join date: Sep 2006
519 IQ
#1
I wanted to write a song that I didn't need a pick for, seeing as I never have. So a short song with just tapping, finger picking, and strumming .

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Attachments:
fd.zip
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bloodshed344
UG Newbie
Join date: Nov 2007
1,673 IQ
#2
Pretty good although I think you harmonized everything together too much and a few notes seemed out of place. It was a good song, pretty emotional, we don't get too many of these type of songs on this board, mainly just power metal and metalcore, so this was pretty cool
7.5/10

Crit mine if you want:
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=831675
Its_Rock77
Anthony Green Fanboy <3
Join date: Jul 2007
1,501 IQ
#3
I agree. the only problem was a lot of times there was "too much" harmony and it didn't sound right.

other than that, I really liked this.
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