#4
Quote by BerryTree
why would you do that


He's probably taking the piss.

Also, I wouldn't italicize Band names, though quotations would be fine IMO. Great essay overall.
#5
You've done a pretty good job so far, keep it up and i'm sure you'll have a good grade.
Quote by J44
Alright, here's da deal. I was eatin some frys when da ninjas attacked! I leaped over the table and grabbed a katana. I stabbed the 1st ninja and did a backflip then I threw my shuriken through the last 2 billion remaining ninjas. So I won.