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Join date: Mar 2007
109 IQ
Yeah, a friend and I cooked this up a few days ago and I think it's decent enough to bring on here.

It's obviously nowhere near done, but right now I'm just trying to figure out what needs cut out/ what needs rearranged. I feel that it's a bit disorganized, but in any case...

Let me know what you guys think. Thanks.
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Join date: Nov 2006
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i'd say mainstream radio would eat that **** up
Join date: Jun 2007
435 IQ
Some pretty good stuff there. Only criticism I have of it so far is that you could add a bit more variation to the bassline in the intro riff

And if I'm right the title is the same as a song by Angra :P
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Join date: Mar 2007
109 IQ
I have no idea why he wanted to label it as "acid rain". It sounded pretty corny to me, so we'll end up changing it along the line, I just kind of wanted to call it... something.

In any case, I want to try to make it sound a BIT more original than it does... any ideas?
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Join date: Jul 2007
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awesome username.

I like where it's at now. you've got some good stuff goin on. a breakdown would be nice. some kind of guitar solo would be cool too. other than that, I can't really think of anything. good job. I liked it.
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