#1
Here is some more metal - untitled - i've run out of titles.

Lots of riffing and melodies and some synth stuff.

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http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/Donkey+Fly

I will C4C.
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'...and those who fought on that day of honor, the day of victory shall be forever remembered as Lime Green' - Oct 31st 08
Last edited by Donkey Fly at Apr 11, 2008,
#3
It's guitar and OK.

That's not intentional as i don't like SOAD.

Thanks for listening.
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Xbox Live GT = The Donkey Fly
'...and those who fought on that day of honor, the day of victory shall be forever remembered as Lime Green' - Oct 31st 08
#4
yeah listen to aerials by SOAD the intro are similar, that being said when the drums hit that was super awesome dude, and the harmonies and riffs were progressive and catchy and u killed that first solo after the drums hit. the whole vibe kinda reminded me of blind guarding idk if uve heard of him, but they got that epic almost medieval ish sound.

crit?https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=836348
#5
I find this song pretty good. If you get a band and put vocals in this song, it could get pretty far out and be popular.


I listened to few other songs, you should form a band and even try to publish a album. Just a suggestion.

Your solos are nice.
#6
After the drums enter its awesome! NICE MAN! Killer stuff =)

Crit my stuff in my thread?
#7
i'll walk with it =

- Cool intro,love the drowned leads !

-nice riffs and leads,sounds like in flames ..

-the harmonies need some work..

-im sorry i didnt like the keyboard much..

-nice arrangement ,varied nice atmosphere ...

-the drums need some more work

-solos is great ! sweeping yay !

-catchy riffs

-love the lead work,realy good effort !

Crit ? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=13799194#post13799194
Wolv
#9
Nice man! This is some tight stuff. Solo's are strong, intro's nice and foreboding, but i'm really not digging the , well it sounds like a clean guitar near the end, just doing some background stuff. You ended the song at a good time to, it was just starting to get a little bit repetitive when it finished.

Crit?

http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=837927
#10
I really liked the leads you put over the intro, the intros rhythm just couldn't stand on its own in my opinion. I didn't really care for the section from :30-:41, but it isn't too bad. The harmonies however I did like quite a bit, the rhythm underneath it was the only problem but thats not really a big deal here. The first solo in this was great, nice job on that. Your distorted tone at about 2:03 seems a bit thin to me, but the riff itself is good. At 2:11 it was a bit of a let down, I figured you were building into a solo but it just went with the riff. Second solo is also great, like the first, both were very strong and I don't think either need much work. The outro seemed a bit abrupt so I'd fade out slower and keep the song going for just a bit longer. Very catchy riffs in here though, nice work.

C4C? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=836418
Any of the songs on there would be fine if you could, thanks.