#1
i was back at the old house today, as you would most definitely say,
had we lived together or even just neighbours.
and up the routine staircase i decided that,
yes,
old habits go out of shape
because i still hold my breath.
and when i leave this house
the keys and locks make love
and i come back to
a dugout.
Last edited by somewhat_here at Apr 11, 2008,
#3
this is very cool, very creative. kind of short but it works with this.
thanks for the crit.
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