#1
Wrote this for a buddy of mine (my drummer) who's wife cheated on him.

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She's such a sad soul...
She's down and unwhole...
She comes to me in my dreams...
She's torn apart, as it seems...

She can't get away from her evil...
She can't do it, though hard she may try...
She's lonely enough to die...

She's what makes me wanna cry...
She's what makes me wanna die...
She's gonna haunt forever so...
She hurts me more than she'll ever know...

She came to me at night in a dream...
She poured her tears on out in a stream...
She cried her screams to one without a sound...
She's lost herself out in the potter's ground...

She can't get away from her evil...
She can't do it, though hard she may try...
She's lonely enough to die...

She's what makes me wanna cry...
She's what makes me wanna die...
She's gonna haunt forever so...
She hurts me more than she'll ever know...

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#5
Quote by Flipaningage
did your drummer beat you up?


No. He was cool with it.
#7
Quote by Deflection
Very typical rhymes, not very good.


Any suggestions you might have?