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Hey there everybody!!
I just wrote these lyrics, and I was hoping you guys could tell me what you thought

Joe's Song (Counting Dimes)


Hello, hello, my name is Joe
Would you like to go with me to a show
And would you hold my hand tonight
And would you squeeze it extra tight
When the scary parts come on the screen tonight

And will you stay with me forever
Will you love me for the rest of our lives
Even if we're stuck here in my mom's house
Clipping our coupons and countin' dimes

You make me very happy, don't you know?
And I'm sad that I have to see you go
Do you think you'd stay with me
So maybe you and I could see
If there's a chance for you and me?

And will you stay with me forever
Will you love me for the rest of our lives
Even if we're stuck here in my mom's house
Clipping our coupons and countin' dimes

And will you stay with me forever
Will you love me for the rest of our lives
Even if we're stuck here in my mom's house
Clipping our coupons and countin' dimes
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thanks a lot party people
let me know what you think