#1
Hey guys, I'm working on my first song. I don't have a tiltle yet, or most of the song done for that matter but here it is so far. I am looking for suggestions for improvement and developement of this song, comments, and any other things you want to post. I have been playing for about 7 months now.

E/----------------------------------------------------------------------
B/----------------------------------------------------------------------
G/----------------------------------------------------------------------
D/----------------------------------------------------------------------
A/-------9--------------9-----------9------------9-9-9-9-9-9-9-9-9-
E/-7-5----------7--5--------7-5-----------------------------------------


E/---------------------------------------------10---10-10------13---13-13---------16---16-16
B/---------------------------------------------10---10-10------13---13-13---------16---16-16
G/--------7---------------------7----------------------------0-------------------0------------------
D/-----9--------------------9------------------------------------------------------------------------
A/7-------------7-------7----------7------------------------------------------------------------
E/----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------


(FAST) SLOW LAST 2 TIMES
E/-------19---19-19-----------------------------------/----Repeat 7 times------------/
B/-------19---19-19-----------------------------------/----------15-----------17-------/
G/0-----------------------------------------------------/-----17--------15------------17-/
D/------------------------------------------------------/-------------------------------------/
A/------------------------------------------------------/---------------------------------------/
E/-----------------------0-----------------------------/-----------------------------------------/


So, thats it. FOR NOW!! So, any comments?


P.s. I will continue to update this thread as I get new ideas for the song.
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Last edited by JackWhite333 at Apr 12, 2008,
#3
Quote by Alexishxc1337
Provide a tempo or something to go along with it, or a recording of yourself playing it.

How I can make a recording? I don't have any video cameras or tape recorders.
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#4
Quote by JackWhite333
How I can make a recording? I don't have any video cameras or tape recorders.



Use a usb mic and recording software like Audacity.
Or just provide some sorta tempo.
#5
Quote by Alexishxc1337
Use a usb mic and recording software like Audacity.
Or just provide some sorta tempo.

How about 3/4
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#6
3/4 is a timing. we need a tempo to know how fast it should be played. use a metronome to find the tempo of the song, 4 clicks/beats per measure. there are online metronomes you can use.
Last edited by frig at Apr 12, 2008,
#7
Sorry, im not too good at this kind of stuff yet. How about this:

First line up too the rapid strumming of 9's: 92 BPM
The 9's: 108 BPM
Next Whole Line: 92 BPM (including the 19's on next part)
Last Part: 168 BPM (except for last 2 times which are 92 BPM.)

Is that ok?
My Albums

TALKING LIKE A JERK EXCEPT
YOU ARE AN ACTUAL JERK
AND LIVING PROOF THAT

SOMETIMES FRIENDS ARE MEAN


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Last edited by JackWhite333 at Apr 12, 2008,