Wow, that was really cool

Measures 4-7 were great.

I liked the lead part at the end.

Keep going with this. Hopefully it'll turn out to be awesome.

If you want to you can crit something on my profile, but you don't have to because my crit wasn't that detailed.
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I dug that. It was a pretty jammin song so far. I liked how you had everything sort of based around the original riff, but variated it enough to keep everything interesting sounding. The leads were simple, but well done and fit well over the rhythms.

Overall. 9/10. Good stuff.

Crit mine if you get the chance? http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=920801
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