#1
i was just wondering if i should try and use these riffs i came up with to make a full song or just ditch them, i'm asking you all since friends aren't too honest. its on my profile.
there are a few timing mistakes but nothing too serious
thanks all c4c


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#3
The riff from the start to about :28 would probably work better if you played it cleanly in my opinion, would probably work well as a clean intro.
The next riff from :29 to 1:28 or so has a good idea but some of the chords you used didn't really fit at all, it seemed almost random.
And the riff from 1:30 to the end I really didn't like at all, I'd probably get rid of that and not try to work with it.

C4C? Any of the songs would be fine if you do, thanks
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=836418