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Pretty good, but honestly why is this here? Wrong forum, bad title... I guess ill comment here to tell you what i think of it, but it's still reported.

You need to work on getting your fast parts cleaner. I realize there's some bad sound quality going on, but i can hear on a few of the fast parts you stumble around a bit trying to make it sound faster than normal. Also, don't overlook vibrato, it works wonders. You've got great placements for something that would work if done a little better, but that'll come with more time. A very good melody to the song, i liked the arppeggiated bit, and a few parts of the solo were really good (the rest would've been too, but like i said, clean it up!). A good start though, definitely keep working on it (i suggest making it longer, you've got a good thing going with it)