#1
I call it 13 because I was 13 when I wrote it and it's the 13th song I wrote!

Don't be shy to give crits.

It still needs vocals and a solo on a electric guitar (I just can't write a guitar solo )!

I'm still working on this song.

C4C
Attachments:
13.zip
Last edited by kiki94bass at May 12, 2008,
#4
Quote by guitar-godfrey
im sorry if this is in the wrong thread but, what programme do you guys use to create guitar midis?

just use guitar pro and go to File/Export/Midi
#5
Quote by bloodshed344
It was really good, just the major things I noticed:
Acoustic solo ended abruptly
Drums were not good at most parts
Drums never started again past measure 77
Seemed a little short

7/10 - Pretty good

Thanks dude! I know that the drums aren't any good because I don't know how to play drums or make good drums in GP, I just put them there so that it seems a little more complete, and there are drums past measure 77 but I didn't put them in GP ! I know it's short but as I said it needs a solo on an electric guitar which should be played while the last riff is still playing
#6
Something between the crappy acoustic guitar (It's GP's fault, not yours) and the bass seemed outta tune, but the playing on the higher register of the bass covers this problem.
#7
I really liked it when the acoustic kicks back in around bar 60, and the bass lines were sweet.
#8
I finished it a long time ago but my computer didn't work for a while and i fixed it so I'm posting the finished tab (I erased the drums because I SUCK at making drums in GP )
#9
it seems really incomplete to me. You have some great riffs, especially on the bass, and with a little refinement it could be quite excellent. I can write a drum track for you, if you'd like?
#10
Quote by Thomasoman
it seems really incomplete to me. You have some great riffs, especially on the bass, and with a little refinement it could be quite excellent. I can write a drum track for you, if you'd like?


Please write the drums
#11
the intro had a weird rhytm, and you repeated too much the riff IMO, even with some of he variations I got tired of it. I liked the acoustic at 60, the outro was great too. I thinks there is not much flow in the song, you just repeat several riffs one after the other. The bass Was awesomee through the whole song. Great job on that. I think it stills needs some work, and you should make it longer ( finish that acoustic solo! ).
#12
Quote by rodrigomierh
the intro had a weird rhytm, and you repeated too much the riff IMO, even with some of he variations I got tired of it. I liked the acoustic at 60, the outro was great too. I thinks there is not much flow in the song, you just repeat several riffs one after the other. The bass Was awesomee through the whole song. Great job on that. I think it stills needs some work, and you should make it longer ( finish that acoustic solo! ).

I know I repeated one of the riffs too much but that's because vocals go while that riff is played but I didn't put the vocals in the tab.
Thanks for the crit .