#1
Here's another piece I wrote in Biology.
My friend asked me to write this for him ('cause apparently I'm a rhyme-god... hmm...) so I'm worried that it doesn't come from me. Well it certainly doesn't come from my heart - I've never even done pot, let alone or . But maybe I faked it pretty well...

anyways, please give me some suggestions or comments


Save Me
by The Decline

I need the real thing, this placebo ain't working...
I need more and more just to stay in control
Give it to me, now it's something I live for...
I don't have enough, and it's been taking its toll

I'm inside out and everything is spilling away
There seems like there is nothing I can do
I'm falling through a tunnel but I only feel the walls,
I'd given up this life but now I'm turning to you

MEDICATE ME!
It's just not enough, and I'm spiraling down
INNERVATE ME!
I'm falling apart, 'cause of something I found
CONSECRATE ME!
I need more than a savior, miracles won't do...
SAAAVE MEEE!
But nobody can... not even you...

I'm falling apart, falling apart...
I'm falling apart, falling apart...

I'm holding on by a couple of fingers,
I know that I am slipping but I can't do a thing.
I wanna climb I wanna pull myself over, but
I'll start with crawling through the Hell that each day brings

When I'm without it, when I'm sitting without you...
I think my decimated brain should just end.
But sometimes I can fix myself the only way I know
And for a time I can be happy... happy again

MEDICATE ME!
It's just not enough, and I'm spiraling down
INNERVATE ME!
I'm falling apart, 'cause of something I found
CONSECRATE ME!
I need more than a savior, miracles won't do...
SAAAVE MEEE!
But nobody can... not even you...

I'm falling apart, falling apart...
I'm falling apart, falling apart...

I remember when it used to be a different way
When there was more than just you keeping me high
But things have changed and I can hardly remember that...
Most of the time I just think [shout:] how I want to die!

LIBERATE ME!
Come to me now, and save me from myself
TERMINATE ME!
I've given up hope, and I don't know what to do
DESECRATE ME!
I'm lost to myself, and it just goes to show
SAAAVE MEEE!
That no one can save me... no one but you

SAAAVE ME...
I'm caving into my affliction...
SAAAVE ME...
You have become, my addict-tion...
#2
Read the rules of the forum. 1 piece per day, 2 per 6 days. Reading the rest of the rules will help you as well.


Closed.
This is not a pipe